Paragraph Analysis

In this post I will be analyzing my paragraphs in my QRG.

Michele Weber Hurwitz.  June 14, 2015. 

I learned that my strengths are transitioning from topic to topic and setting up the format of my document. My current draft is still very rough so it's a bit hard to tell what I have done a good job of so far and what skills need some work. From the peer comments I received, I need to fix a few grammatical errors and provide more evidence. This is all still in the works. I think my weaknesses could include making my document more aesthetically pleasing. I need to learn how to make it look like a real QRG by adding more pictures and minor visual things.

Here is my copy for paragraph analysis.