Draft of Open Letter

In this post I will discuss the draft I've composed for my open letter.

Centpacrr. "Air Mail Service" 20 July 2008. Public Domain.

The draft of my open letter can be found HERE.

I am still unsure of how I want my letter to be structured. This is a pretty rough draft, but I still put a lot of thought into it. When revising my draft, please pay attention to the tone as I really am struggling to find the balance between casual and formal. Also, please give me your full feedback on whether or not you think I followed the project guide correctly and answered the initial questions. Thank you!!

I peer reviewed Kyle's draft and Kelly's draft.